zmanxtreme
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"my name is hillyshu"
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Post by zmanxtreme on May 10, 2011 11:15:03 GMT -5
Name: Hillysu Neith gender: male Age: 18 Race: human Appearance: he is 5'5"and muscular. He has reddish-brown hair pulled back into a male ponytail and blue eyes. He wears black leggings and combat boots. He also wears blue tunic and a black belt . He has a tatoo of a black dragon spiraling on her left arm. Personality: He isn't very trusting, though he trusts his friends very much. He likes to hang out with nice people, thgouh he doesn't mind the rough and tumble nature of some of his friends. He likes to laugh and cheer pther people up. He has a quiet destructive temper. He helps who he can without expecting pay. History: His father mistreated his family. He attacked them after getting drunk every night. Hillysu left when he was 16, to escape this and to deal with his grief over his mother's death. He often sends letters and money to his 8 siblings, and he visits once a year. His mother's father taught him weapons when he left, and he stayed with his grandparents until he was 18. He left them then, to seek his destiny. Through hard work, he became famous in Kakariko. sample: One day hillyshu was travleing home, as he does every year. However, he noticed something felt off. He felt like he was being watched, so he pulled out ies sword and hid. Then he saw someone someone he grew up with, but hadn't seen since his 16th year of life. His father, so he got out of the bushes and, his father hugged him and apologized and they went home together.
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Post by Kairu on May 10, 2011 13:16:07 GMT -5
It's not bad but could you go a little more in-depth about the personality?
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zmanxtreme
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"my name is hillyshu"
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Post by zmanxtreme on May 10, 2011 14:42:06 GMT -5
Is that better?
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wdw4
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maybe they arnt so bad
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Post by wdw4 on May 10, 2011 18:38:59 GMT -5
WOW!!! i only got altot wrong with mine all you have to do is wait for kairu or zeek to aprove it
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Post by Kairu on May 11, 2011 0:42:04 GMT -5
That just brings up a new issue, I'm not going to claim I'm a child of abuse, when I'm not, but how I figured it, is if my father abused me repeatedly every night of my life until late in my adolescent years, I wouldn't trust him. I personally wouldn't let the man near me. However, that being said, I'm approving it anyways since, again, I'm not a child who has been abused, so I do not know how I'd truly react. Plus I wouldn't want to feel like I'm forcing you to 'feel' or believe a certain way. Freedom is a right, so without further ado, Welcome to the Forum!
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